i like your green one which says website 13 (probably suppose to mean website 3). that is by far your best piece out of the three. i think the other two could use a bit of work. the third one, the blue is way too saturated for as much is showing. this almost makes it look like one the pop up website your computer throws you to to inconvenience you. the one above it is a little confusing the way you have all of the options layed out. it almost looks like you opened the start menu at the bottom of the screen and spanned over a couple and now you have 3 big windows of options up.
On all of them I would consider moving all the boxes away from the edges. The boxes that run off the edge disrupt visual movement. Just a suggestion. Your simple design style works.
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i like your green one which says website 13 (probably suppose to mean website 3). that is by far your best piece out of the three. i think the other two could use a bit of work. the third one, the blue is way too saturated for as much is showing. this almost makes it look like one the pop up website your computer throws you to to inconvenience you. the one above it is a little confusing the way you have all of the options layed out. it almost looks like you opened the start menu at the bottom of the screen and spanned over a couple and now you have 3 big windows of options up.
ReplyDeleteOn all of them I would consider moving all the boxes away from the edges. The boxes that run off the edge disrupt visual movement. Just a suggestion. Your simple design style works.
ReplyDeleteFirst design stands out by far. The feeling of moving back in the frame space is really nice.
ReplyDeleteYeah I like the first design as well. It looks like the Xbox menu so much; well done ;)
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